A Piece of My Mind

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I love being on this side of teaching. Don’t get me wrong. I miss my English and reading classes at the middle school, but now I get to work with all of the staff and students on every campus. Being able to see our brilliant teachers and their students expand their technology use and enjoy it makes it even better.

But I also get to network with some really great minds outside of White Oak. One of those great minds resides only a few hours west of us in Burleson ISD. Kim Estes has gone above and beyond what many people would do outside of their every day jobs in helping us. I will expand on her work with our ePortfolios after I finish the monument to her in my office, though.

As I was reading through her newly redesigned blog, I found what every tech-loving, literacy teacher dreams about: a course outline complete with 6+1 Traits standards (our ISD uses New Jersey Writing, but they are basically the same) seamlessly meshed with technology integration where the curriculum is driving the technology. She created the outline, and then she found tools that supported the work.

Kim, you are a jewel to share this with everyone. I honor you by reposting it below with credit to you for the hard work it took. Thank you for being so generous in so many ways to us. Everyone who uses any part of this: I would appreciate it if you would leave a comment below to let Kim know what a valuable resource this truly is for us.

This is my teaching outline for
my class Improving Writing With Technology.  You are welcome to take
it, use it, and share it with others. A link back here or a little
credit would be appreciated!

Improving Writing with Technology  6 + 1 Traits

1. Ideas – A clear, focused content packed with details
   • Mind Mapping and Brainstorming
     • http://www.mindmeister.com/
     • http://www.mindomo.com/
   • Gone in 30 seconds
     • image slideshow to inspire and encourage ideas
     • can be a daily activity or used at each stage of the writing process
     • Email me if you’d like a copy of the HS Version I’ve already created.
       
   • Get Great Prompts
     • http://writingfix.com/ – an interactive plot creator
     • http://writingfix.com/Classroom_Tools/dailypromptgenerator.htm – prompt generator
     • http://writingfix.com/writingfix_for_kids.htm – interactive writing games
     • http://writingfix.com/right_brain.htm – Right Brain prompts
     • http://writingfix.com/left_brain.htm – Left brain prompts
     • http://www.creativity-portal.com/prompts/imagination.prompt.html
   • Create and record songs to help students remember their traits – http://writingfix.com/PDFs/6_Traits/Idea_song.pdf
   • Use websites that have everything you need in one place – http://writingfix.com/6_Traits/Idea_Development.htm
2. Voice – Writing that is active and engaging for the reader (a specific audience)
   • Using your voice to give your writing voice – use audacity to record your writing and help you hear the voice in a work
     • Play examples of speeches and audio books that demonstrate clear voice
     • Students write a piece and then record their own (or mix it up and record someone elses)
     • Students then review the works and critique with a rubric
   • Literary Theatre/Readers Theatre
     • Students create melodramas from literature read in class with a special focus on voice and characterization
     • Works with their own original scripts and poetry as well
     • http://bms.westport.k12.ct.us/mccormick/rt/RTHOME.htm – Reader’s Theatre Basics website
   • Using Movies to Teach Voice – play famous scenes from
     movies AUDIO ONLY and have the students listen for the voice in the
     script writing. (How was it achieved – word choice, tone, sentence
     fluency, etc.)
   • Create and record songs to help students remember their traits – http://writingfix.com/PDFs/6_Traits/organization_song.pdf
   • Use websites that have everything you need in one place – http://writingfix.com/6_Traits/Voice.htm
3. Word Choice – Choosing the right word or words to convey a message, idea, or feeling
   • Dead word funerals
     • photo story or video http://youtube.com/watch?v=kQODcdUtmH4
     • Students choose the words, write eulogies, put tombstones on the walls as reminders
   • Use websites that have everything you need in one place -http://writingfix.com/6_Traits/Word_Choice.htm
4. Sentence Fluency – Sentences are clear, concise, and various lengths
   • http://youtube.com/watch?v=Db-YgMac7Uo – student video on sentence fluency
   • Use websites that have everything you need in one place – http://writingfix.com/6_Traits/Sentence_Fluency.htm
5. Organization – The order makes sense, including strong transitions words and a clear beginning, middle, and ending
   • SMART Lesson
     • getting things in order (elem) kjahdfssdfldflksdl;f
     • Literature game (ms)
   • Create and record songs to help students remember their traits – http://writingfix.com/PDFs/6_Traits/organization_song.pdf
   • Use websites that have everything you need in one place – http://writingfix.com/6_Traits/Organization.htm
6. Conventions – Proper usage of grammar, punctuation, and spelling
   • http://www.teachertube.com/view_video.php?viewkey=e5b854ffad5f70a516c8
   • Create and record songs to help students remember their traits – http://writingfix.com/PDFs/6_Traits/conventions_song.pdf
   • Use websites that have everything you need in one place – http://writingfix.com/6_Traits/Conventions.htm

   • Grammar Blast (elementary) – http://www.eduplace.com/kids/hme/k_5/quizzes/

7. Presentation – Neatness, appealling to the reader’s eye
   • http://poster.4teachers.org/ – create writing posters
   • http://toondoo.com – make comic books
   • Create a publishing center in your classroom – http://www2.scholastic.com/browse/article.jsp?id=4385&FullBreadCrumb=%3Ca+href%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww2.scholastic.com%2Fbrowse%2Fsearch%2F%3FNtt%3D%253cand%253e%2528%2528audience%2B%253ccontains%253e%2Bteachers%2529%252c%2B%257bTechnology%257d%2529%26query%3D%3Cand%3E%28%28audience%2520%3Ccontains%3E%2520teachers%29%2C%2520%7BTechnology%7D%29%26Ntk%3DSCHL30_SI%26Ntx%3Dmode%2Bmatchallpartial%26N%3D0%26Nty%3D1%22+class%3D%22endecaAll%22%3EAll+Results%3C%2Fa%3E+%26gt%3B+Grade+3+-+5

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1. http://senior.billings.k12.mt.us/6traits/index.htm – interactive reading selections that students rate.
2. http://www.kimskorner4teachertalk.com/writing/sixtrait/sixtrait/handbook.html – list and handouts for a student binder students can create their own to use all year
3. Introduce each concept with a short infomercial! http://www.teachertube.com/view_video.php?viewkey=bbc0d17a4f8d4324cc8e
4. http://readwritethink.org/student_mat/index.asp – interactive flash based games and activities
5. http://writingfix.com/traits.htm#lessons – Free lessons on each aspect of the 6 traits
6. I-pod and lyric inspired lessons – http://writingfix.com/ipod_prompts.htm
7. Self-Assessment/Teacher Feedback Post-it notes – http://writingfix.com/classroom_tools/post_its.htm

Types of Writing

1. Narrative
   • http://hrsbstaff.ednet.ns.ca/marshs/movies/index.htm
     - March Movie Madness. 8th grade students write scripts that can be
     chosen to later be turned into short films. Students must base all
     short stories to demonstrate the plot diagram. (you could specify any
     content)
   • Radio Theatre
2. Persuasive
   • Political Speeches from candidate sites used to identify aspects of persuasive writing
   • Video and Audio commercials for a product or service that target a specific audience
   • http://www.teachertube.com/view_video.php?viewkey=7f6788918f03c42b123c
   • Create videos or audio or photostories to teach the elements of this type of writing
     • http://www.teachertube.com/view_video.php?viewkey=3f745343bab61a5f8aee&page=2&viewtype=&category=
3. Comparative
   • http://my.hrw.com/nsmedia/intgos/html/igo.htm – Interactive Online Graphic Organizers – Highlight, type, and print (or save and put on website)
4. How-To
   • Photostories and video on How-To subjects (written by one group – recorded by another)
5. Research
   • Netrekker
6. Poetry
   • Song Lyrics
     • Research them for figurative language (metaphor, simile, personification, allusions, poetic devices)
   • I Am Poetry
     • http://www.teachertube.com/view_video.php?viewkey=8c621d4e83cb0ec9616c&page=2&viewtype=&category=
   • Share your favorites
     • Encourage kids to read their favorites to the class
       • Record their readings
       • Turn it into a poetry SLAM, a beatnik coffee cafe
       • Have your students record other teachers and administrators sharing their favorite poems
       • http://www.favoritepoem.org/
   • Interactive SMART Lessons
     • Father’s Day Poems
     • Easter Poems

Editing

1. Google Docs
2. SMART tools
3. Gaggle.net

Feedback and Peer Review

1. Gaggle.net
2. blogging

Learning is Fun

1. http://writingfix.com/classroom_tools/word_game_for_writers.htm

Professional Development & Teacher Tools

1. http://readwritethink.org/lessons/index.asp?grade=0&strand=0&engagement=0&display.x=40&display.y=13 – Lesson Plans
2. Writing across the curriculum…a grassroots movement…. http://writingfix.com/WAC.htm
3. Involving parents in writing – http://writingfix.com/classroom_tools/family_write.htm
4. Mini-lesson of the month – http://www.unr.edu/educ/nnwp/Mini_Lesson_of_the_Month_Club.html
5. Art and Writing – http://writingfix.com/classroom_tools/art_and_writing.htm
6. Help with the writing process for teachers – http://www.mwp.hawaii.edu/resources.htm

7. Elementary Integration Ideas – http://www.cyberbee.com/intclass.html#LanguageArts

More

1. SMART Lessons on Writing http://education.smarttech.com/EdCompassCMS/Template/LearningActivity/FileActivitySummary.aspx?NRMODE=Published&NRNODEGUID=%7b0A5EF2A4-15A2-4F78-983D-8643D7EFAC0C%7d&NRORIGINALURL=%2fste%2fen-US%2fEd%2bResource%2fLesson%2bactivities%2fNotebook%2bactivities%2fBrowse%2bNotebook%2fUnited%2bStates%2fdefault%2ehtm%3fsort%3dSubject%26search%3d&NRCACHEHINT=Guest&sort=Subject
2. Great site by a real teacher – http://corbettharrison.com/index.html
3. Dena Harrison’s site is a great resource – http://denaharrison.com/
4. United Streaming – One Place -
   • http://streaming.discoveryeducation.com/tools/writingPrompt/index.cfm? – writing prompt builder home page
   • Assignment builder
   • Quiz builder
5. http://www.dmoz.org/Kids_and_Teens/School_Time/English/ – Helpful site for interactive resources